Archive for March 2008

The Hard Part

I've had an idea rolling around in my head for several weeks now for a new picture book, but I'm having trouble getting going with it. That makes me frustrated and nostalgic for the days when I had just started writing for kids.

Three years and a couple of months ago, I wrote my first children's book and I was off and running. I was enthralled with getting ideas and fascinated with words and concepts and amazed that I could actually write a book. A real book! I would get an idea, or think of a phrase or get a picture of something in my head and I would sit down at my computer or scribble in my notebook and a book would appear. It was magical. I would flip through my rhyming dictionary and see the words blue, shoe, glue and have an epiphany and soon I'd have a little manuscript about blue-shoe-glue.

It would completely suck, of course, because I didn't really know what I was doing. But boy, was it FUN. Ignorance is bliss, you know. I would send it off to my critique groups and daydream about it selling within weeks of submitting it anywhere because it was soooo good and sit down and write another book. But along the way, I started learning about the business and what makes a GOOD manuscript and I had to face the reality that my "genius" manuscript was not only NOT going to sell in weeks, but would never sell. And it really wasn't all that great either. Sigh.

It's much harder now. I have hindsight. I know that that blue-shoe-glue manuscript may be fun to read and well-written and unique, but that's not enough. That book has to mean something. It doesn't have to teach or preach (in fact, please don't!), but it needs a universal truth to it, it needs to resonate with the audience, have meaning for them- it needs a reason for being, so to speak. And that is the hard part- to blend the fun idea that I can't wait to write with something bigger. And of course do it keeping all of the conventions of the genre in mind- a certain number of pages and words, good pacing and strong plot, illustration potential and the right details, rules of three, read-out-loud language, repetition, the senses, true dialogue and voice and on and on and on.

I want my stories to sell and to become books which will mean something to the people who read them and the children they share them with. I want my books to make people laugh and make kids beg to hear them again. So even though it's harder to write now and the process takes me longer and I get more frustrated, ultimately it is also more rewarding. Because when I finally DO hit on the right mix of universal truth and fun, it still feels like it did in the beginning- magical. AND it just might get to be a book someday.

Okay, back to writing...

p.s. No actual manuscripts about blue-shoe-glue were ever written. The true subject matter has been changed to protect the innocent :)

The little rack that could....

Want to know the BEST place to buy my book, Hush, Little Dragon? Right here:



My parents own a small grocery store. We usually sell magazines and adult best-sellers off a small rack, but we've never sold children's books before- until now. Of course, we're only carrying ONE title :) but it is flying off the rack. In fact, I bet our store has sold more copies of my book than any other single location anywhere! This is largely due to that fabulous promotions person (i.e. my husband) I have in place who happens to manage the place, but I also couldn't ask for better placement in the store. So thanks, Mom and Dad!

And I'll tell you, it is probably one of the more unusual setups for an author. I work there part-time, so I'll be doing some filing or accounting stuff, regular old mundane work-stuff, and I'll get called up front to sign a book that a customer just purchased! Glamorous, huh?! Haha! But you just can't believe how much fun I'm having. Yes, it's F-U-N to sign your own books! Anywhere. Anytime. :)

I'm also in the process of setting up some real book-signings, so I'll post that info shortly when plans are in place!

Impossible!

One of the things about being a published author that I will NEVER get used to is seeing my book out there on shelves in bookstores everywhere (thanks to my contest participants!!) or being told by people they read my book (and hoping they liked it!) or seeing my name "out there" in unexpected places. Well, that's three, but they're all related. But it's a jump from your small, private world of all that you know to a bigger world that you sometimes forget is out there when you get wrapped up in your own chaotic crazy family and daily life. It is weird, wonderful and disconcerting- all at the same time. But mostly wonderful, like last night. I sat down to catch up on a few of my favorite blogs, like Seven Impossible Things Before Breakfast....

and there is MY name and my book! Well, not to hijack their true intent, they profiled Kelly Murphy, the fab illustrator for Hush, Little Dragon, but they had some wonderful things to say about Hush, too :)

If you've never read their blog, you should be checking it out on a daily basis. They do a terrific job promoting and reviewing books and I always enjoy reading what they have to say.

And if you are a faithful reader (and already admire their highly-literate musings), can you BELIEVE they mentioned me??? I know. I can't either.

Thanks, Jules and Eisha and all the people in the comments section that read or bought my book!

Nine Days Left!

So, now that the Flu Fog has lifted from our home, and all the eggs have been found, and way too much chocolate has been consumed, and I've settled into a nice routine of obsessively checking my Amazon rankings now that my book is out (no, I don't really DO that...I have minions who check that for me :)

I thought I'd take a look at the calendar and just see where we're at-

OMG. ONLY NINE DAYS LEFT!!! NINE! HOW could this have snuck up on me???

We find out in NINE DAYS:

The Pigeon Wants A...


Oh, how I wish I lived in New York!!!

p.s. The Pigeon Wants A Puppy. I'm tellin' ya....

The winner!

And the winner is..... Loyal Blog Reader Tammi Sauer!! YEA Tammi!

I know, totally unexpected. But hey, these things happen :)

Tammi's winning entry is especially notable for its creative re-positioning, a feat attempted by no one else. Chickens.

Before:



And the (much better) After shot:



I'm sure Jez Alborough doesn't mind- ha!

However, a Special Note of Thanks and homemade chocolate chip cookies go out to another entrant, HenryA, for his photo:



and it had absolutely nothing to do with the subject line of his entry saying "Blog Contest and I love you so much Mom!" Or that that bookshelf looks strangely familiar. Hmmm.....

Okay, after all that excitement, back to our regularly scheduled Recovery From The Upper-Respiratory Flu. Blogging to resume when I feel human again.

* A Contest! *

But first.... a teaser- The reason I'm doing this now is because I am sitting on news. BIG news! BIG-BIG news that I can't, as yet, divulge (at the behest of unnamed people for whom I will do not only this, but walk across hot coals as well, if she should ever ask, although only as long as they are not tooo hot, because I'm really a wimp when it comes to that daring stuff...) and since I am NOT a patient sort of person, I must do something to occupy my brain or it might explode. Oh, and you'll read that BIG news here first, so stay tuned :)

So.... MY CONTEST!!

I don't get out much. Lots of kids, remote area, whatever- I've got my reasons. BUT, that doesn't mean I don't wonder how my dragons are doing out there in the "real" world! And my brief sojourn to Green Bay (and Tammi's box o' goodies which contained BOTH my dragons AND A Birthday For Cow, one of the most hotly anticipated titles of the year) got me thinking. I'd like to know just who is keeping my dragons company out there. And I love bookshelves! Just look up there!

If you already bought a copy of my book, take a picture of it on your bookshelf and send it to me! If you get out more than me, go to your local bookstore and take a picture of it on THEIR bookshelf- you'll get a bonus for that! And extra credit for hilarious juxtaposition, if you are so inclined, because I love me some unexpected juxtaposition just as much as the next person (ha, okay, so maybe I'm just a weirdo. Whatever...)

HOW TO ENTER: Easy. Take a picture of my book somewhere on a bookshelf. E-mail it to me at boni.ashburn AT gmail.com (substituting the @ symbol, of course, for the AT :) before midnight on Tues 3/18/08. Make sure to put "Blog Contest" on the subject line. Ya got one week. I'll put the entries in a hat and my glamorous assistant will draw a winner!

THE PRIZE: A signed copy of Hush, Little Dragon! But wait- there's more! The bonus (for pictures taken in bookstores) will be awarded in the form of a SECOND copy of Hush, Little Dragon for you to donate to your local library or a library of your choice. I've already donated several copies to various libraries because, to me, libraries are where IT happens-- love of reading!! And I love nothing better than for my dragons to be on THOSE shelves :)

So, it's win-win! One for you, one for your library- how easy is that? (Not to mention, a GREAT excuse to go to a bookstore- who doesn't need one of those??) Okay everyone, get snappin' and good luck!

p.s. Since I believe my blog readership at this point mostly consists of my family (waves) who are, of course, excluded from the competition, you have a FANTASTIC chance of winning if you take part :)

Review!

Ta-da! My first review of Hush, Little Dragon!

Since I've known my not-entirely-sweet dragons now for about three years, I've become accustomed to their twistedness. I forget that not everyone might find them as charming as I do :) Glad to see that this reviewer did!

Awwwww.....

What's even better than my sister buying a whole bunch of my books?

This:

Anna and Avery


That is my nieces, Anna and Avery, reading my book, with smiles on their faces :)

Advice

So, advice for future published authors (from someone who has been published for all of three days):

When your Amazon ranking drops precipitously from in the 500,000's to 100,000 (NOT that you look at that sort of thing, because you DON'T, really, you DON'T, ever, it means noth-ing...), don't get too excited.

It only means that your sister just bought copies of your book for her entire neighborhood (!)

Thanks, Teri :) AND Teri's whole neighborhood in Broomfield, Colorado!!!

(Gosh, I hope they like it :O !!!)

My Book Is OUT!!!

Our annual family winter trek to a water-park hotel this year took us to Green Bay, Wisconsin on, coincidentally, the weekend my book came out. Before we even got to our hotel, we went to my FAVORITE children's bookstore, Butterfly Books in DePere. What a great store- my kids always have to drag me out of there kicking and screaming. I had already corresponded by e-mail with the owner and knew they had my book on order, but they didn't have it yet. That was okay, I had no trouble finding some books to buy :) And I will for sure be revisiting there this summer to do an event of some sort (Thank you so much for your enthusiasm and invitation, Barbara!)

The next day, we went over to the Barnes and Noble in Green Bay and I saw the most wonderful sight:

On The Shelf!


I didn't expect it to be there either, but y'know, it would have been weird if I hadn't looked, right?

AND THERE IT WAS! Hush, Little Dragon on a bookshelf other than my own! :)

Lots of ridiculous stuff ensued, like me squealing (and honestly, almost fainting) and dragging my family over to point at MY books and my kids wondering why the heck my book was on the shelf in a bookstore in Wisconsin instead of in that box at home (I think they're finally "getting it" HA!) and then all of us crouching behind a shelf watching someone actually PICK UP MY BOOK OFF THE SHELF and READ IT, all the way through! She thought twice about adding it to the other book in her hand, but did put it back, which really did not bother me one bit. She picked it up and read it!! Someone I didn't know.... Oh, that was a very fun thing to watch. Thank you, random woman in Barnes and Noble on Saturday in Green Bay, Wisconsin!

I went over to the customer service counter, at my proud husband's suggestion, um, I mean, insistance, to thank them for having my book on the shelf and offer to sign the copies (did I mention there were FOUR???!) and I was standing there with my oldest son and the woman behind the counter said, "May I help you?" and I mumbled, "Um, no, I don't think so...." and hastily retreated.

Total chicken-out. Uh-huh.

Then I found my husband in line at the front register... and he was telling the Community Relations Manager that I would like to sign my book for them! He outed me!!! She was extremely nice, however, and congratulated me and asked me to please sign them, which I did!! My first signed books. And she asked me to consider doing an event there as well. Thank you, Shirley!

I know, I'm using way too many exclamation points here, and this is way too long, but it was just possibly one of the coolest things that has ever happened in my life. Next to, y'know, getting married and having all those kids :)

Also, stay tuned- this gave me an idea and I just might have some sort of contest.... We competitive types love a good contest...